Thursday, October 13, 2016

In Case You Forgot To Remember Comments

Rating: 5.0

The noose around my neck
Slips sometimes, sliding
Down loosely, and I almost
Forget it's there, quite almostly
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Seamus O' Brian
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Susan Williams 13 October 2016

Neal! ! ! ! Way to make your readers sit up and take notice! Brilliant. Original. Throat-grabbing [literally]. I have marked so many of your poems as remarkable in my private journal [ Couch Conundrum, Attrium, The View From Here] and the more of your work I read the more I will list. You are an extraordinary writer, Neal. This one goes at the top of my list. It goes without saying that this is a 10 and that I'm adding it to PoemHunter's version of My Favorite Poem List.

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Seamus O Brian 14 October 2016

Thank you, Susan, I am humbled by your kind and generous words. This piece was born out of intense, momentary frustration, and then took on a life of its own. I am so glad you liked it. Be blessed today! Neal :)

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