Friday, June 9, 2006

~in Case You Forget~ Comments

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In case you forget what we had,
Look into my eyes ever so sad,
Morning that day that was a painful toll,
That day that plays over in my soul!
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Michelle Guza
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Nikki White 20 June 2006

I really enjoyed reading this poem. You should proofread before you submit a poem though. I thought it was excellent. Your rhyming scheme is unique. Great write, check my pieces sometime. Nikki

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