In Came The Dawn Comments

'today will be a beautiful night' I love this line! Great poem. Meghan

Splendid work, sounds so familair, the sleepless nights.

Patrick this is superb mate. Keep writing like this and your going places I wish I could have wrote this way when I was your age. Dont stop harness the language you are brilliant with words. Seamus

I really liked it pat! get some sleep ~_~ k?

nice! last couplet. capped off the imagery for me. Sus