In Between The Gap Comments

Very beautiful write....it's like comma killed a man..punctuation can do misunderstandings..Loved reading it.

What is missed in the empty space is something to be filled in by the reader. Empty spaces make the poem more meaningful. Without emptiness a poem would be a monotonous single word which has no meaning. Thank you for a thought provoking poem.

We all miss something in the empty spaces otherwise we would be brilliant and that would never do. We have to keep striving to be better.

I miss something In the empty space Among the words And in between the gap great poetic lines!