In Between Heaven And Hell Comments

A sense of utter confusion n desperation is depicted in a way that pulls the reader. Something we all at some point go through, the forces of good n evil pulling us.

A poem on life on a philosophical base has been nicely depicted and presented. I found proper use of adjective that attracts the readers' mind. Slowly the gloom of centuries Surrounds me with its variegated walls And I grope in congealed darkness Hooting at my malignant fate. I feel like floating as nascent lotus In the waves of perilous ocean. World will find my dribbling tears Merged with briny water... great theme. I love these lines. Full vote.