~ In Between Change ~ [18 Words Poetry] Comments

Laughter is the best 'Poetic Medicine' Here poet intelligently served that thro' cerebrate way and it is 'rib-tickling' Great reading Thanks for sharing 10+

Very intelligently and sophisticatedly crafted JOKE sensuality without vulgar Cheers

Finest/filtered shade of enjoyable JOKE... poetically well presented...thanks for sharing

nice poem but there is no rimings keep writing, , , , ,

Fun~ Gun...is my comment Lol

real fun..bright idea..congrats

Crisp and intelligently crafted pun...10

Wow! What a humor? ? ? Filtered Stuff]]]] :) Ten+++

Well, thats true form of poetry for me.. You have left the task for the reader to decide Whether to laugh at it! Or, to sqeeze the eyebrows and think it out! I loved it..

Nice one, Ms. Niv. Concise, funny, very well written

This is very clever, although I had to read it twice to get the joke......

Hahahaha great jest in poetic format kudos tenner