In beauty we dwell
Blooming stark from spring,
Who moves with flight,
Seasons the air
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Novelised with boons! With the muse of love and life. Nice work.
A lovely verse as I stroll through your garden seeing and feeling as my senses are teased! A pleasure to read. Dorothy...A Poet Who Loves To Sing
TRULY NICE but the line that says 'Can ever sever The cord of our love' causes me to disagree. In this riot, i pray that nothing ever breaks the cord of love in the mighty name of Jesus. Time has come to have the right foundations of the GODLY institution built on the solid ROCK; Jesus. How is this my dear? B the way do you ever read any of my poems?
The poem delivers a very romantic and creative view on love. It is wonderful how you can uncover love and fantasy out of nature. Nice imagery. Nice poem. I like your style.
Different from the normal, coded, thought provoking, creative! Good job. You might not ming seeing some of mine. Comment, criticize etc. I'll appreciate it. Regards
In beauty we dwell Blooming stark from spring, ... yes its true- the image says beauty as blooming from spring (flowers, green leaves, grasses) fullness of nature. nice imagery... however in the last part of the poem are nature's furry. and the truth again, 'love' is beyond all of these becasue everything has its meaning and reason. just like the typhone its can damage property and coust life but it has a deeper reason which only nature can reveal to her children, and to me it seems that we part of her that anytime she will sommond us into her bossom. nice poem
no offense meant, but i laughed when i first started reading it, i wondered where are you from, the language not understood but neat, i liked it and the end of the poem, i am waiting for my volcano love.
The love described here is very, very strong... :) .
lovely poem, I loved reading it & thanks for sharing10
i like your style of writing, wish i can write just as well.. very romantic and very well written poem.
You are inspiring, but i think such a poem should be coloured with rymx. You are good. check out mine, pls, say exactly what u feel. thanlks
Ah Afternoon Adinna, a very deep relationship poem. the ending of the poem, it Amazing and beauty it has and touching words. very deep it is. Please keep up the work
I must say this is very different, yet just as beautiful. Great job!