Monday, May 18, 2009

In Beauty Comments

Rating: 4.6

In beauty we dwell
Blooming stark from spring,
Who moves with flight,
Seasons the air
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Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
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Bernard Snyder 29 September 2015

I must say this is very different, yet just as beautiful. Great job!

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 September 2015

Novelised with boons! With the muse of love and life. Nice work.

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Ramesh T A 29 September 2015

Love will surpass all hurdles when it blooms strong!

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Ovi Odiete 29 September 2015

This is a beautiful poem about Love..

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 September 2015

Nicely done. Love will exist for ever.

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 17 May 2015

A lovely verse as I stroll through your garden seeing and feeling as my senses are teased! A pleasure to read. Dorothy...A Poet Who Loves To Sing

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Mugano Paul 29 December 2009

TRULY NICE but the line that says 'Can ever sever The cord of our love' causes me to disagree. In this riot, i pray that nothing ever breaks the cord of love in the mighty name of Jesus. Time has come to have the right foundations of the GODLY institution built on the solid ROCK; Jesus. How is this my dear? B the way do you ever read any of my poems?

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Kasthuri Velu 16 November 2009

Nice poem.........well written.

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Janae Lagge 28 October 2009

That is very pretty! Keep it up! :)

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Rex Mathew Mathew 24 October 2009

The poem delivers a very romantic and creative view on love. It is wonderful how you can uncover love and fantasy out of nature. Nice imagery. Nice poem. I like your style.

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Jo E 08 October 2009

It different to other poems. Its good! :) Keep it up!

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Opeyemi Borisade 29 September 2009

Different from the normal, coded, thought provoking, creative! Good job. You might not ming seeing some of mine. Comment, criticize etc. I'll appreciate it. Regards

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Jester's P 28 September 2009

In beauty we dwell Blooming stark from spring, ... yes its true- the image says beauty as blooming from spring (flowers, green leaves, grasses) fullness of nature. nice imagery... however in the last part of the poem are nature's furry. and the truth again, 'love' is beyond all of these becasue everything has its meaning and reason. just like the typhone its can damage property and coust life but it has a deeper reason which only nature can reveal to her children, and to me it seems that we part of her that anytime she will sommond us into her bossom. nice poem

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* Naphright * 27 September 2009

no offense meant, but i laughed when i first started reading it, i wondered where are you from, the language not understood but neat, i liked it and the end of the poem, i am waiting for my volcano love.

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Aldo Rino Smiloveux-bell 27 September 2009

The love described here is very, very strong... :) .

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Stephan Mclean 27 September 2009

Fantastic poem..nice style...10!

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Seema(Aanamika) 80 27 September 2009

lovely poem, I loved reading it & thanks for sharing10

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Tharindu Atukorala 26 September 2009

i like your style of writing, wish i can write just as well.. very romantic and very well written poem.

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Oche Babs 26 September 2009

You are inspiring, but i think such a poem should be coloured with rymx. You are good. check out mine, pls, say exactly what u feel. thanlks

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Sarah Franks 26 September 2009

Ah Afternoon Adinna, a very deep relationship poem. the ending of the poem, it Amazing and beauty it has and touching words. very deep it is. Please keep up the work

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