Wednesday, April 18, 2018

In Awe Comments

Rating: 5.0

A tiny dot in this huge world
Is not so prominent or noticeable
which can be erased and easily swiped
But you decided to choose it as your own
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Rini Shibu
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Bharati Nayak 09 July 2018

A tiny dot in this huge world Is not so prominent or noticeable which can be erased and easily swiped But you decided to choose it as your own And gave a new shape to shine in your glow - - - - - A wonderful poem with great spiritual insight.

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Robert Murray Smith 09 July 2018

As a grain of sand on the beaches of life we are washed afresh each day.++10

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 April 2018

A thiny dot! The spot of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Lamar Cole 18 April 2018

This is a very thought invoking poem about a tiny dot.

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Rini shibu 18 April 2018

Thank you so much Lamar..! ! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 April 2018

Yes, we are all tiny dots in this huge world. Yet, we are unique creations of God. And each and everyone has a purpose. A beautiful and inspiring poem.

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Rini Shibu 18 April 2018

Thank you so much Rose Marie..! ! ! Rini**

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Valsa George 18 April 2018

Yes, we are all tiny dots.... yet when God breathes His grace into us, we shine like diamonds! This humility to be aware of our own littleness and the need to depend on God is the first step to grow in spirituality!

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Rini shibu 18 April 2018

Thank you Mrs.Valsa for your wonderful comment

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 April 2018

It is really awe that God is a tiny point of light that you have so nicely and astutely inscribed in this poem. The way of your presentation is fantastic and amusing. A beautiful spiritual poem is shared amazingly.10

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Rini shibu 18 April 2018

Thank you Mr.kumarmani..! !

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