Thursday, September 24, 2015

In Aqua Sanitas Comments

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Your words,
that flow out of your mouth is like
a river.
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Souren Mondal
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Pamela Sinicrope 25 October 2015

Typos aside this is a great poem Souren! You've capture something here... The intensity of young love and dissolution of such love as well as the confusion of emotions between the lovers... My pain... Your pain.. Our pain.... Where does the love stop and the pain begin?

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Gajanan Mishra 24 September 2015

but it is you, i am yours..

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Souren Mondal 24 September 2015

'on' not 'no'.. Typos are gonna kill me: (

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Fabrizio Frosini 25 September 2015

I suspect that you usually write your poems 'in a hurry'.. Then, simply SLOW DOWN and re-read your write before release the ''done'' 'button' ;) :)

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