Sunday, February 24, 2013

In Another Verse Comments

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You pull apart the stones from the sand
Feel it through the stiffness of your skin
And as the softness subtly drifts through the gaps
Empty, again you fill up your hand
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Sara Tehrani
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Hans Vr 03 March 2013

We tend to fall in love and out of love, just at the blink of an eye Passion is never far far away and can once lift us up ad then pull us down. It really tends to come back and that is how I interpret your poem. I think the poem contains a deep wisdom. Very well done, Sara

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