Wednesday, May 20, 2009

In Another Time Comments

Rating: 3.9

So many nights they have come and gone
And she knows in his arms she does belong
But time so sadly has never been on their side
And too many lonely tears she has already cried
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Tia Maria
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Carl Harris 25 May 2009

This is a very beautifully written and quite poignant poem, Tia, one that expresses sorrow for a love that could not be. Though there are far worse tragedies in life, nothing is quite as heart breaking as a love that never came to fruition. You have expressed that so well in this brief poem. Carl.

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Fay Slimm 20 May 2009

'In sweet sweet fantasy' is where dreams are woven at times Tia... so cling on in there - I feel as Chris says, that dreams have a habit of really coming true...... hugs and 10 ++ + from Fay.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 May 2009

Tia, it is soft and green. Melodious. 10++ with pleasure.

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Ian Bowen 20 May 2009

Tia, well written...some nice lines in this one.10/10 Ian

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Serena Heart 20 May 2009

Wow. I love it. I feel like I can relate.

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