Wednesday, April 20, 2022

In And Outside Comments

Rating: 4.9

Like two trees planted together
For fifty years side by side
Leaning on each other in foul or fair weather
Together grown and now abide
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soren Barrett
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Richard Wlodarski 22 April 2022

An incredibly beautiful testament to the power of love! I know of relationships that have grown as magnificently as those two trees.

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soren Barrett 22 April 2022

Thank you so much for reviewing and commenting on this poem

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 21 April 2022

Marvellous poem Soren........10

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soren Barrett 21 April 2022

Thank you so much Geeta for you review and kind words

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Two becomes one, in and outside "… and endure foul weather, whatever.. Your poem, sure Sir, allude to human life as well: friendship, marriage. Good poem. Congratulations

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soren Barrett 20 April 2022

Thank you so much for your review and kind comments

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