Friday, August 19, 2022

In And Out The Lusty Nil Wedding Bells Comments

Rating: 4.8

(Inspired by marvin goldfarb's gr8 contest in which I won a trophy cup and wonderful poems by other poets as noted below, 'LESSON IN LIFE' by BrittBrattTechy, 'Every child deserves better' by Poetryintheblood, and..'TODAY'S SOCIETY' By Gary. W. Hill.)

My poem below then read the poems I copy pasted in my author notes.
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s.zaynab kamoonpury
COMMENTS
Kevin Patrick 20 September 2022

Cheaters are just deceivers looking for a quickie. People going through lovers like going through clothes, changing any time they want. Great work S!

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Bri Edwards 10 September 2022

favorite line: 'As if the heart were an everchanging love mart! ' : ) bri but, REALLY, for the single moms and kids I give a.... : (

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Bri Edwards 10 September 2022

's', I read your poem and a few lines of first poem in poet's notes. I give 4 stars to your poem, for your thoughts and some rhyming. CONTRACEPTION is wonderful if available and used.

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Unwritten Soul 26 August 2022

It is right, i guess the one who change partners like that has trust, insecurity issue. Probably not now but eventually will feel how life without being someone who love and care them. Desire will go but heart cant be left empty.

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Richard Wlodarski 23 August 2022

Poetess Kamoonpury, this is an excellent poem about promiscuity. Some incredibly beautiful lines. You've so brilliantly captured the essence of unfaithfulness. I truly enjoyed reading this work of art. Thank you very much for bringing it to mine attention.

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