In And Out Comments

To me this poem speaks of the subconscious...and hints at Descartes and his saying Cogito Ergo Sum/I think therefore I am. The odd subconscious question of am I really alive, or is my non-being alive enough to imagine myself? Nice provoking thoughts flow from this poem, that can be as deep as the reader allows them to be.

This poem seems to be about a busy life when we are trying to fit so much into each day I enjoyed reading this. Well done Gary terrific work

This poem seems to me to be a comment on a very busy life and how we get caught up in