Monday, April 3, 2017

In An Eating Mood Comments

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I enjoy myself when I am in an eating mood,
I don't think of myself when I am an eater,
Everything is forgotten it's only dish and my hunger.
When I think now I have grown old!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Bri Edwards 24 April 2017

i am VERY proud of you, my 'student'! ;) :)

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Bri Edwards 24 April 2017

wonderful lines: But when I think what an enriched dish she used to serve I forget my indigestion and I don't know how I manage to make the light food the same old baked brownish chicken...................even i understood the poem. and i also enjoyed (especially) : it all ends well with a kiss of lemon and lime. ................i'll bet you 'swap spit with the cook! right? to MyPoemList and to May showcase. Thanks. hey! i'm (almost) getting hungry looking at the photo.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 08 April 2017

After the beauty poem of the rose, i am now down to earth thinking of food that too chicken, marinated with lime. (As i do not eat chicken, i have no idea of its taste.) But for chicken fans, here is an appetising poem with an equally delicious picture. A full vote for you Sir, for the eating mood!

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Khalida Bano Ali 04 April 2017

Enjoyed this funny poem......................................................

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