Wednesday, October 22, 2014

In Among All The Ruin There Is Reparation Comments

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In among all the ruin, there is life.
God, he must work at the corner catalogue shop.
The one before 'Afterlife' next to 'Hope and Despair'
With 'Liberty Bell' ringing, counter ringing in both ears
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Mark Heathcote
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E Nigma 22 October 2014

I am not one to comment on too many religous type poems BUT I liked the theme in this poem. It brings to mind the thought that we are all the multiple personalities of a divine infinite intelligence that is the imagination of life itself and we are all here viewing these things subjectively. We are all one body just different version of oneself learning and evolving as we climb that ladder of chaos making our way back to the energy source that is life. We could call it God, Creator, Higher Power, Intelligent designer and it really doesn't matter what we want to label it as, as long as we can meet in the middle accepting one another no matter what our belief systems are. Neat poem you give the reader something to think about without coming across as preachy and that is always the way to go. Nicely done sir.

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