Monday, December 26, 2016

In All Its Wildness Comments

Rating: 5.0

In all its wildness I see the sky
Full with stars, the shining lights
The light that is lit by the heavens
Are beyond my imagination
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M. Asim Nehal
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Poetic Sky 26 March 2021

Very interesting poem. I am happy to read it.....

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bri edwards 09 November 2018

(cont.) fruit for thoughts sounding a little off to me. so i Googled it and was 'given': Anything that gives you a reason to stop and ponder is food for thought. It's an expression that's been around in its current form since the nineteenth century, yes, food is what i'm used to hearing, but fruit is a food, so i won't argue! ! ! :) but what hope is kept alive? ? bri (:

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bri edwards 09 November 2018

(cont.) ok, i read it at least twice, and now i feel the lack of punctuation bothers me more than a little. ha ha. favorite stanza: Like spiral, thoughts, trying to unwind In the form of some art on the canvas Or by the pen in poetic form Even in form of notes of the music (cont.)

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Nosheen Irfan 26 December 2016

What a wonderful write. No doubt art draws inspiration from Nature. Nature stimulates thoughts n words that lead to the creation of beautiful poetry or painting or some other form of creativity. A huge 10.

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