Thursday, April 28, 2016

In Alexandra's Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sapphires richer than India's Prize;
Facets oceans deep spark crystalline fire.
Windows that reflect compassion
Darken to indigo at injustice,
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Pamela Ascroft
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Tom Billsborough 28 April 2016

This is different to your Laura poem but equally successful. The images draw me in with their wonder. Yet remains diaphanous with truth and honesty.... a beautiful line. You love colour in your poems, as I do. When I think of both of the poems I've read I think also of a magnificent stained glass window. There is also a fine rhythm and a flow to this poem. Tom Billsborough

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