Saturday, September 13, 2008

In A World Of No Secrets.... Comments

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In a world of no secrets.....
Wow what a change that would be.
We could hide nothing,
Everyone would know,
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Brittany Graviet
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Robert Whitney 02 October 2008

understandable topic, a beautifully put poem, and an exellant execution, some of your best work, post some more, some people may not like it, but it is always sure to dazzle some one

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Monika Marie 14 September 2008

What's great about this poem is that both perspectives are seen through the same eyes. Very creative.

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Jhonny Thermidor 14 September 2008

I like poems about life and love. The message in ur poems are strong enough to drag my dream to reality. Although u have many new poems I enjoy most of them. Among them are In a world of no secrets, My forever, ...

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Stacey Watts 13 September 2008

Wow your writing is getting really good.. I really enjoyed it and I make no secret about it..

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