Sunday, November 8, 2015

In A Wonderland Comments

Rating: 4.9

Don't know how in a wonderland,
It looks like earth, its landscape
Amazing color and attractive shape,
All round I see a grassy green land,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Amitava Sur 10 November 2015

Not for sinful women and men, It's reserved for non-violent children! ... A lovely imagery for a land with peace. Very nice. Thanks for sharing

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Seema Chowdhury 09 November 2015

very expressive and a colourful poetry, thanks for sharing

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Bisma Mirza 09 November 2015

Really Beautifull Poem............10 on 10

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Loke Kok Yee 09 November 2015

a special place reserved for them? thank you sir

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Kelly Kurt 09 November 2015

The innocence of children is special. Thanks, Akhtar

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 November 2015

Amazing color and attractive shape, All round I see a grassy green land, ..Colorful flowers fill mind with new essence in such interesting poem shared with love. Wise sharing.10

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Rahman Henry 08 November 2015

Wonderful... Wonderland.... 'It's reserved for non-violent children! '....10++++++++++++++++

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