Monday, July 4, 2011

In A Tree Haunted Forest Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a tree haunted forest
She walks in white;
Hands before her-
She fears the night.
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Patti Masterman
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Ken E Hall 17 July 2011

A haunting story I'm sure runs thru to the lover gone ending with a thank less call, original poem in the haunted forest, nice to read...regards

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Miroslava Odalovic 11 July 2011

It's one of 'those', Patti, brilliant 'easy' writing each word in its proper place, and the craving to reach the goal for the ghost lady is so much like a living human craving :) . Beautiful.

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p.s. I lvd the style and rythm for thar, lol/10

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Who search in vain For love so dead, To match the vision Inside their head. Good write pattie you have a good point/10

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Biff Mcguire 04 July 2011

Good stuff Patti, please keep it coming!

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