In A Strange Land Comments
We live in strange
Urban land,
Here, no one seems
No one's friend,
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The right hand can't Comprehend What the left hand.. evaluating the present situations of life in the world together with experiences. thank u. tony
Thank you indeed for the feedback...but nothing of the sort. This little ditty was a simple quatrain to start with, Then a quirky thought came, and I broke it into small phases, made a few changes, to look like how it is now, giving it a modern dress.... and lo it attracted richer response than I would have expected otherwise.
The Modern Society well captured, Due to many up-to-day implements, gadgets and all that more, one seems not to need the help of the other, we can live online, do our shoppings online and even chat online. But I prefer the society as my grandmum had experienced and that can be realized, I reckon. You have created a brilliant poem of today's society, Sir. Thank you so much for sharing this magnificent poem. A 10 Full Score.
I'm amazed at your understanding of this society and its mores. Thanks for liking this little ditty.
BUT THERE IS NOTHING STRANGE WE ALL LIVE WITHIN EARTH'S RANGE AS LONG AS HUMANS LIKE WE REMAIN AP JI
Times have changed. With increasing urbanisation and the advent of newer and newer technologies, life has become more mechanical. The personal intimacy and warmth have totally disappeared from our relationships. Life has become more complicated and hectic that we do not know even our next door neighbour. There is always an uncertainty in the air and we cannot anticipate what will happen at the next moment! A succinct image of modern times.....!
Well, I can see that you with a poetic heart also possess a good thinking head, and I appreciate your analytical comments.
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Let me find, I know you won't say which one, but thanks for the 'infinite' rating. Well since the world/universe is round, zero is closest to infinite. But thank you any way.
A very pragmatic write sir! This work has a great substance to ponder on... I appreciate this precise write that bears a great insight....10/10
Good to see your comments, Dr Swain, after a while, and thanks for appreciating the poem.
The right hand can't Comprehend What the left hand Might next do; .....outstanding conceptualizations. A gorgeous poem is amazingly shared. Thank you dear Pathak sir for sharing this poem with us.
Thank you, the warning is in a lighter vein. But are we not growing up a little shallow?
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7/19/2025 2:40:53 AM # 1.0.0
A stranger! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thanks for reading and liking it