Sunday, May 7, 2006

In A Song Comments

Rating: 3.5

The rain is coming down in a never ending river,
Silver, Flowing, Streaming down down down,
in a song,
ever long.
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>Starr Williams<
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Duncan Wyllie 01 June 2006

A fine poem by a top quailty heart, what a gift you have! Amazing! Love Duncan 10!

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Sylvia Spencer 17 May 2006

Starr how well you describe the rain i your poem, it is raining here we are suffering our worst drought since 1976 and he rain has come tonight it must have been your poem that brought it a truely great write cheers Sylvie

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Sandra Fowler 17 May 2006

Rain is indeed a song and you know the tune so well. I can hear it very clearly in this lovely poem. Warm regards, Sandra

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>Starr Williams<

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