Your love gnaws at my heart
And leaves it in a silent ache.
In a silent ache, my heart bleeds
Your memories ooze out
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this reads like a beautiful sonata, so lovely and heart-aching. Tis good to read after a long dry and lonely spell - - 10++ my friend!
A poignant theme captured beautifully. Love and loss are depicted with great expression and spontaneity. Kudos!
Love inflict such wounds on the hearts, that the pain is so soothing. Thank you, Nosheen.
A poignant write. The power of love has been vividly depicted in this heart rending write. Very touching verses with superb imagery.
silent ache oh in heart; silence gnaws passionately! ah injured there deadly! silence in love groan of pigeon couple while we think this sound of love where the rhythm of momentary separation brings unsolicited burning scar inside! ! ! !
Hi Dear Poet, I am at loss of words. What a swell of poetry. Before your poetic comments, my lines are almost worthless. So beautifully done. My heart goes out to you, Sir.
Like waning moon in Krishna paksha.....the kernel of this poignant love poem. Liked the second stanza the most.....5 stars.