Tuesday, April 29, 2014

In A Paddy Field Comments

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Muddy land that borders by the sky
Flood that lulls and some frame those trenches
Arable land that buds new life
A long view that stretches to thee
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SALINI NAIR
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Dinesan Madathil 30 April 2014

Harvest of money has replaced the innocent realms of harvest of grains as the modern farmer is blunt in his attitude to nature and its bounties that are in extinction. A fine write indeed Salini, you have fertile imagination and that will result in many more poems being penned down by you. Please, see the inbox message I have sent. ALL THE BEST.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 30 April 2014

the last stanza holds an astounding beauty of life!

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Valsa George 29 April 2014

The green paddy fields stretching endless is a beautiful and refreshing sight... but unfortunately paddy fieds are filled and high rise buildings are erected in place of paddy cultivation... A nice write!

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Anand Brown 29 April 2014

Beautiful poem, evocative and utterly absorbing.

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