Monday, October 7, 2019

In A Name Comments

Rating: 5.0


...
Read full text

M.J. Lemon
fog
COMMENTS
Unwritten Soul 28 November 2019

or fluid-y like water...surfing through lips hahaha

1 0 Reply
Mj Lemon 14 April 2020

Tremendous imagery, Soul. Thank you so much for your observations and for reading.

0 0
Muhammad Ali 27 November 2019

If I understand... the names ice and fog are not cool but these things are. I think there is something serious in the way of humour. nice lines dear.

1 0 Reply
Mj Lemon 14 April 2020

Thank you, Muhammad. And yes, humour must always be grounded in the serious!

0 0
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 26 October 2019

Woah cool super word play with sarcastic tinge. Both aye is possible. Thumbs up. Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too titled, ' smart phones and smart cars...."

1 0 Reply
Mj Lemon 28 October 2019

Many, many thanks!

0 0
Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 October 2019

nice though but why cool some may mistake you to be COLD

1 0 Reply
Mj Lemon 19 October 2019

Thanks, Poet! Perhaps those in a fog?

0 0
Leeann Azzopardi 16 October 2019

oh to have a cool name

1 0 Reply
Mj Lemon 16 October 2019

But it is so cool! Thanks, LeeAnn.

0 0
Kumarmani Mahakul 09 October 2019

Wonderful imaginary and imagery. A beautiful poem in brief is incisively delineated.Thank you a lot dear Lemon, GBU.

1 0 Reply
Mj Lemon 09 October 2019

Very much appreciated. Thank you so much, Kumarmani.

0 0
Richard Wlodarski 08 October 2019

That's pretty darn cool, M.J.! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

1 0 Reply
Mj Lemon 08 October 2019

Richard, thank you so much!

0 0
Close
Error Success