Tuesday, June 30, 2015

In A Late June Dawn A Small Poem For Sana Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a late June dawn
first a solitary bird speaks, then a pair,
eventually scores with their insistent
tunes and unvarying rhythms. A pause.
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Daniel Brick
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Leah Ayliffe 13 August 2015

This poem is beautiful. The words so well piece together images combining nature and human qualities. I easily placed myself into this setting while reading - thanks!

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I enjoyed this poem. Your words well crafted. It is a beautiful piece

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Sana Ghostana 05 July 2015

First off, thank you, Daniel! I do adore nature and this poem made me remember watching the sunrise every summer morning. It has been far too long since I've done that...Any-who! Your poem made me feel peaceful and nostalgic, which are two feelings I love to have! Thanks again! -SOH 😊

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