Saturday, September 27, 2014

In A Land Of Pristine Peace Comments

Rating: 4.5

Dreaming in a moon lit night
Being forsaken alone,
The smiling moon was winking at me
Through the window's glass panes.
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Amitava Sur
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Geetha Jayakumar 17 October 2014

Lovely dream to be cherished again and again. Beautiful imagery of nature. A new sun rise is welcoming you..... Loved the way you presented it.

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Valerie Dohren 02 October 2014

A lovely dream, expressed through a lovely poem.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 29 September 2014

Good morning poet Amitava. That was an interesting poem, I enjoyed, Loyd

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Akhtar Jawad 29 September 2014

A nice description of a dream,10.

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Roseann Shawiak 29 September 2014

Amitava, beautiful and heart touching imagery, light, airy and happy. Finding a divine and pristine peace is quite a feat these days, yet you have portrayed it wonderfully. Awakening to the giggles of cherubs is alluring and magically delightful, still being in a trance must have been enlightening. Love this poem, Amitava. Thank you, RoseAnn

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Valsa George 28 September 2014

So..... it was a lovely dream! Borne on the wings of cherubs, you landed in a beautiful garden! You were so lost in the mesmerizing beauty of the place with myriad flowers! Unfortunately dawn came and robbed you off that dream! A well crafted poem, Amitava!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 27 September 2014

Great imagery crafted with very loving and touching words.......very nice sir....I enjoyed it very much

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