Monday, July 29, 2013

In A Journey Comments

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A boy of dirty shirt and pants
What his eyes longs I know not
But thoughts in mind strained a lot
As knots of soul he stretches great.
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Narayanan Nair. P Perunthanam
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Valsa George 31 July 2013

The bleary eyed boy drumming and singing in the train for a livlihood invokes compassion! ! A good write! !

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Geetha Jayakumar 29 July 2013

Uplifting poem.. Very good message....some one is throwing food other one is begging or picking up from rags.

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Gajanan Mishra 29 July 2013

all rain for divine profit, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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