In A Heartbeat Comments
In a heart beat - I'd kiss your lips,
hold you close, no chance of a miss.
In a heart beat - I'd lay you down,
amongst the daisies that surround.
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Brilliantly beautiful poem, sings to my mind so delicately, I love it! Fantastic heartbeat of love for sure. Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn
Your heart beats are lovely that is why it created such a beautiful poem.
.........this is what poetry was meant to be like...for someone you love....enjoyed ever line .........................~~~~~ you gave me a big smile~~~~~................................
Wow! I'm impressed. Each line is so profound, yet beautiful... I enjoyed reading every line. Nicely written.Thank you for sharing this great piece.
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7/20/2025 2:30:41 AM # 1.0.0
Beautiful, sensual write with great rhythm and flow, superb lines that make my heartbeat dance with the exuberance of your words!
thank you very much for very great feedback Hazel, appreciated.