Monday, May 14, 2018

In A Dream Sun Never Sets Comments

Rating: 5.0

East is morning gymnasium,
West is evening gymnasium,
Sun after waking up thinks,
And everyday does exercise,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Michael Walker 03 September 2019

A poem with length and psychological depth to me. I like the mention of 'the east gymnasium' and 'the west gymnasium'-as I used to like the gym.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 May 2018

Time is running! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Susan Williams 19 May 2018

Dusk is giggling, / Light has embraced the paddy grass, / In shyness they have twisted their heads, / To drop down grains of paddy in soil, - - - - That is definitely original imagery! ! ! I applaud you whilst I am giggling with my friend Dusk! Love it, love it, love it. I give it a thousand starry-eyed 10's and hoist this onto my fav list! 10++++++++++++++

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Chris Embrick 18 May 2018

Such profound truth. Even though it is night, the sun is still where it has always been. It is man who wanders through space on this cosmic ship seeking the light. Purity cannot be denied. They dream was given in truth. You teach well my poet friend and mentor. Be blessed and dream on.

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Rus Mer 17 May 2018

brother your writings are worthy to read as if you follow master poet William Wordsworth.. this is a shinning exaple

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Akhtar Jawad 16 May 2018

Earth needs sun to survive so it dances in an orbit of love and its love that rotates it on its axis. A lovely poem.

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A great philosophical write with compelling imagery. In a dream, sun never sets. For it just gives its.rays to revive the desire to dream on. Wonderful poem that inspires.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 May 2018

Time has come to proceed towards purity, As tiny grass is meditating to grow, As setting sun is glowing to revive noon, To regain self power and dignity, Soul has to dazzle in eternity, -Beautiful expression! A fascinating poem dear sir! Thanks for sharing...10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 May 2018

just the knowledgeable poetry expected from SIR KUMARMANI ONLY

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Rini Shibu 14 May 2018

Beautiful imagery, time is running and the world around us is moving

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Muzahidul Reza 14 May 2018

Sun Never Sets is proved in science but in poem it sounds philosophical, ............ thanks for sharing

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Alam Sayed 14 May 2018

A poem with fascinating imagery and imagination.

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Pole shift may take place over an eternity of time.It can occur in a flash in a dream. The phenomenon nicely explained in the thoughtful lines.

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Mihaela Pirjol 14 May 2018

This is a fascinating poem! The shifting poles, the never-setting sun, the sunrise from the West, the predictions of six seasons...wow! ...absolutely fascinating!

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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