In A Dark Room Comments

Really a sweet poem. Sweet not only because it has rhyming lines that make it artistic and it uses symbolism and imagery that capture the theme of human life's mysteries within the horizon of just a few lines but also because it throws enlightenment into the dark corners of life. Your lines of the first stanza especially deserve the poetic appreciation because they are the central soul of the whole poem. More can be expected from your poetic pen. Please move on to the next corner and create a poetic flavour again.