Thursday, March 15, 2018

In A Crowded Street [ 2 Tanka ] Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a crowded street
You see faces young and old
Some you've met before
And some you cannot recall
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Nudershada Cabanes
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Perdita Young 16 March 2018

Some you've met before And some you cannot recall ... You locked eyes with some With others, you exchange smiles - - - - My favorite lines, that find an echo in my heart...10+++++++++++ Perdita

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 March 2018

In a crowded street There's little chance of meeting People who once walk with you........so true. Beautiful poem with lovely theme. Thanks for sharing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 15 March 2018

Wow! ! So creative. Beautifully done. Thanks for sharing. Enjoyed its reality.

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Nudershada Cabanes 15 March 2018

Thanks for the comment.

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