Thursday, July 26, 2018

In A Corner Of My Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a corner of my heart there dwells a pain
That thoughts of you awaken each day;
Purposely, I provoke it, then sigh in vain,
Knowing there will be a price to pay
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Lora Colon
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Khairul Ahsan 08 August 2018

Does pain strengthen love? Beautify it? Glorify it? I think the answer to each question is yes. Pain and poetry are complementary too. 10/10 for this poem and it goes to 'MypoemList'.

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Khairul Ahsan 08 August 2018

Love is never without pain, but your poems usually juxtapose love and pain beautifully. Please write your biography in prose. I want to know the woman behind this poetess.

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Bri Edwards 28 July 2018

Quench Your Thirst With A Few Pints Though it only be but one, cast off that damaging flower, for it shall NEVER bring you into Love's fragrant bower. Instead, head for the nearest all night bar in your town, and in a tall one** perhaps your love you can drown. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ** i at first thought tall glass of beer, but it could be a tall sailor, soldier, mail carrier... ; well, you get the idea, right? bri :)

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Bri Edwards 28 July 2018

pageantry of pain: priceless poesy! and........of course.........fantastic rhyming! try another humorous poem write? ? ? for me? how many corners does your dang heart HAVE! ? ? ? where else can i put your 'corner of my heart' other than in MyPoemList? bri :)

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