Friday, November 15, 2013

In A Cold Cold Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sitting at my home
Peeping out through my window
I could feel the world was cold outside
I lit up the fire
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Hazel Durham 07 December 2013

To have everything but in the end a cold heart means an empty life, the old man had everything like wisdom and love to change peoples lives for the better. He knew the value of a caring and kind heart and soul to nourish and give warmth of his good nature to a hostile world! Loved this thought provoking and superb write!

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Ken E Hall 04 December 2013

Cold outside but warmed by the heart a message with blessing...regards

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Neetha Sasidharan 01 December 2013

o my gosh....hats off man hats off.......just grt........ bt coming frm u its not a surprise......... 10 on 10...........kp going.........u will surely rise lk a sun...

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Yasmin Khan 25 November 2013

When we are not compassionate and kind towards others it's always cold inside away from the warmth of humanity, a poem with a message.

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Maya Hanson 18 November 2013

I love this...its meaning is so deep and meaningful (redundance! redundance!) I love it and can't think of anything else to say because I love it too much. ;) ~mye3 poet

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Hans Vr 16 November 2013

Beautiful story with a great message, very poetic

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Efe Benjamin 16 November 2013

Great piece, enjoyed every line

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Dinesan Madathil 15 November 2013

The ancient Chinese painters drew picture of all sorts and asked others to see them through the latter`s eyes. The western painters drew what they liked and asked others to borrow former`s eyes to see the pictures.. You have asked us to borrow your eyes for a while. Agreed and there we see something cold inside too. Excellent write Kanav Justa...

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 15 November 2013

Hmm so were u cold inside yor heart? Its human to b so sometimes. Whateva it is d poem is a remarkable aweinspiring one. Pls do review my latest poem

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Valsa George 15 November 2013

Through a beautiful story, you are trying to picture an inner landscape that lies so frozen, chillier than the external surroundings! We shall strive to warm it up and make it blaze! Enjoyed the suspense and the deeper meaning beyond the superfluous! !

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