Monday, June 24, 2019

In A Clinic Comments

Rating: 5.0

An aquarium
Some benches
And a heart-shaped clock
Hanging half way down
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 October 2019

Cont.... If you dig deeper into this marvelous piece, there are things that have been woven worth to ponder about. A thought provoking poem that conveys a meaningful message. A subtle satire on the condition of the country's capital with respect to its pollutiion problems. I liked this poem. How the great Poet has crafted it is just amazing. Brilliantly penned. Onto my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 October 2019

What a beautiful poem. Wonderful and vivid depiction of a clinic. As if I was transported to that place where I am waiting to be called in by a physician.

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