In A Childs Eye Poem by Lodigiana Poetess
In A Childs Eye
Make a wish then break the wish…
Take the wish away,
Have a look…Make it swift..
Never let it stay.
Hold a hand…
Hold your tongue…
Should be seen not heard.
Left alone…house not home…..
never say a word.
Never dream…never hope….
keep it tucked inside.
Do something new…
Justfor you….
but never show you've cried.
The day begins…The day will end….
You'll say a little prayer.
A hope perhaps that when you wake,
The loveless are not there…….
Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant so beautifully written and imagined. One of the best and thought-provoking poems I've read in years. An absolute joy from start to finish. Thank you for writing this gem and sharing it Lodigiana.10+++ and added to my treasure chest. A modern day classic. Thanks again.
Thank you so very much Shaun, for your lovely and generous comments..It is by receiving such positive feedback that writers like myself feel motivated to do their best work..Thank you truly. Lodigiana x
Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant, so well written and thought provoking it simply flows ending on a unique note. great imagination delivered in spades. Loved it. Thank you for writing and sharing this work of art Lodigiana.10+++ and added to my treasure chest. Thank you so much.
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8/2/2025 5:21:58 PM # 1.0.0
Brilliant and timeless. I will never tire of rereading your poem Lodigiana. Its message is stark, haunting and truly hits home...hard! A full score and thoroughly deserved. Stay blessed Lodigiana and keep writing. Keep writing poetry excellence. Shaun.x.