In A Can Comments

Eric I tell you what my friend you really take a person right to the scene and I am able to be right there with you on that porch. I love the way you bring it. And of course in the final lines it is a real pity how that has become the way of the times. Glad you took the pen out of the inkwell today my friend..... Way to go............Jim

I really enjoyed this poem. It is sad how true it is.