Monday, July 7, 2014

In A Bottle Comments

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How does one feel if locked
In a bottle?
Breathing problem will start,
And wings will be disabled.
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Neela Nath Das
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Sekharan Pookkat 07 July 2014

struggle for existence will kick out and free the wings

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 July 2014

Beautiful poem Neela. One will be choked to death...It's really a suffocation when one feels she is trapped. Short and sweet. Loved it.

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Chuy Amante 07 July 2014

What happens to a Free Spirit who breaks the bottle stands up, stretches her wings breathes in deeply and prepares for flight?

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