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The joy of life is living it, or so it seems to me;
In finding shackles on your wrists, then struggling till you're free;
In seeing wrongs and righting them, in dreaming splendid dreams,
Then toiling till the vision is as real as moving streams.
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Truly inspiring to say the least, every sentence bore courage, a zest sparkled in me to want to win everyday knowing it was supposed to be tough at first for me to glorify in the victory of my results.
now generation always wanted newest and best even they truly can't afford it... why? parenting issue
Really great poem title and everything down to the last sentence. It's hopeful and it gives light on life and how you feel it should be lived. The rhyming flows nicely and its really nice to read. Thank you.
I think this poem absolutely beautiful [3 True word spoken :) x
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8/1/2025 10:45:47 PM # 1.0.0
Very inspiring poem. everyone should real all his poems