Monday, August 29, 2005

Improper Sonnet #1 Comments

Rating: 3.9

Ancient Text have this not.
This feeling: never been recorded.
it is not love.
it is not infatuation.
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Genevieve Surrender
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William Jackson 03 February 2006

i liked it because its a way i'll never be i have'nt got the guts to do anything so rash as to offer the whole of myself to someone i don't love and who really doesn't love me either while expecting nothing in return.

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Erica Francis 13 October 2005

Sorry, David, but you failed to read the title of the poem.

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David Lewis Paget 12 October 2005

Sorry Callisto, but a sonnet by definition consists of fourteen lines.

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Genevieve Surrender

Genevieve Surrender

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