Saturday, June 23, 2018

Imprisoned Light Comments

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How I long to live my life for God,
to be a light in aworld so dark
Thatbefore I rest beneath the sod,
my life will have left some mark
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Zachary Wallace
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Chinedu Dike 24 June 2018

Fine and lofty verse written with clarity of thought and mind. A beautiful devotional poem elegantly brought forth in good rhyme scheme with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing Zachary and do remain enriched.

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Sara Cole 23 June 2018

Good luck with the next poem, keep improving.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 June 2018

Welcome to PoemHunter. Yes, soul is just like burning fire because this is self luminous point of light. God's light of mercy falls on us. His light reveals soul's identity of values and power. We offer our prayer to God. He is the great really. This poem is an excellent and deeply philosophical poem....10

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