Wednesday, September 23, 2009

Imprint Comments

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Upon my heart there is a scar
It's the imprint of your love
Indelible by time or space
This wonderful touch of you
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Fiona Davidson
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Sue Sie 24 September 2009

Images in this poem are lovingly portrayed.....memories to cherish....are forever..A tender write.....Sue x

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Carl Harris 24 September 2009

This is an intensely touching poem, Fi, expressed so achingly well in every single line. Carl.

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Sandra Martyres 23 September 2009

I agree with Fay, this is such a lovely..bittersweet piece, written from the heart with such a smooth word flow as only you are capable of 10+++

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Fay Slimm 23 September 2009

Bittersweet piece Fi..... written with precision and so heartfelt - 10 + ++ Fay

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