Impressions Of Winter Comments

Living in Michigan I can really appreciate this poem Lori. I loved the line about the snow- swollen sticks of marshmallows! All our trees here are covered with snow and now that's the image I'll have when I look at them. Very nice. :) Sincerely, mary

A vivid picture of the play of the stasis described and the movement waiting in the wings. Though it doesn't snow where I am (gets a little nippy, though) , I loved feeling the cold in this poem!

What a lovely write here Lori, an unusual way of putting things, but it works so well. I loved it. Love Ernestine XXX

Delightful picture...... avr

I am feeling haiku here without the form and I'm lovin the imagery... -Eila

That's a lovely write Lori, great descriptions, well presented and thought out. Lovely read, very meaningful. Loved it. Love Ernestine XXX