Impressions Of Midnight Comments

Another good impression of a night time scene where interior thoughts merge with vivid description.

Lori...I love this, and it's in couplets, my favorite pattern. It's nice to read a love poem that isn't mushy. Starting every line with a capital letter is very formal, so I would expect punctuation. Great stuff. I think poetry is often in the things in a poem, and the 'flannel pajamas' make it very real and poetic. John