Impressionistic Comments

yes very nice, good Job Dave

Tan you wrote this beautifully. (10 from me)

TAN... A maticulously detailed piece of work.My take is that you attempt here, to create YOUR '''Impression ''' of some type of portrait of your enamor & have well suceeded in the process. ~F.J.R.~

I love poems that leave much unsaid, only hinted at. Here you have shadows and outlines, vague forms, fleeting impressions. And one is left wondering, guessing, never quite sure. A beautiful poem. Julia

A moment in time. A troubled woman with a troubled marriage fraught with difficulty not of her making. This is the outset of her trouble. One is reminded of the separation between the human animal and a man made society. A vivid picture (impressionistic in style) painted here not with paint and brush but with words through skill.

romantic yet engulfing, i seem drawn in by the subtlty of your observations bravo!

Very nice...Soft subtle but giving every detail...I enjoyed it :)

The words 'sifts in', ''hush', 'dims', 'half-hidden', 'hovers', 'seeps' and 'blurs' are the colours an impressionistic painter would employ to draw the subtlety of your picture. A sharp eye for details, a lover's. Beautiful. Susie.

Nicely written Tan, I am reading more as I go along......regards............willow

Ah yes, the feminine form. I'm impressed. What a beautiful subject in any setting.