Wednesday, April 15, 2009

Impression · Sunset Comments

Rating: 5.0

The street, people walk home wearing the golden light

You know, they’ re tired but happy
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Nancy Wang
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Jazib Kamalvi 18 September 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Nancy. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Douglas Palmer 22 May 2009

i really enjoyed it this poem is quite fantastic

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Shashendra Amalshan 17 May 2009

yeah very visual indeed...thanks for the lovely words..10+

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Myrtle Thomas 27 April 2009

To me this is the better of the three, I loved your metaphors

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Ency Bearis 15 April 2009

the context so simple but presented nicely...well done...10

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 15 April 2009

u are also like the sunset.. but of radiance and brightness.. u amazing =)

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Bradley Lester 15 April 2009

Hi Nancy I enjoyed this poem, it was short but the words struck home. I sometimes find it difficult to express myself onto paper.

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Rory Hudson 15 April 2009

I like this. Simple and unpretentious, yet sensitive and delicate.

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