Wednesday, October 5, 2005

Impossible Comments

Rating: 4.7

forget your former passions,
forget what you've lived,
forget everything that harms you,
forget how she used to smile.
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Ivy Christou 18 February 2006

the tension in this reaches great height! ! and it written with a lot of passion and desire for him to be finally 100% yours. Awesome poem HBH

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Angelique' Rockwell 11 October 2005

very intense-its nice to know i'm not the only one who hates to be sloppy seconds!

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Elena V. Moonray 06 October 2005

Wow! This is the strongest thing I ever heard! And the deepest and the most passionate way to put it. I hope nobody would ever dare to ask you after this :) . Awesome poem! Frankly, at first I thought it was anonymously written for me.

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Bill Smith 06 October 2005

liked this very much, seemed to pick up pace near the end as the anger increased, excellent

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