Oh, if only one could liberate the Soul,
As one does with an imprisoned Dove,
If only Love could fix it all,
Like faith is supposed to do,
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beautiful... i really like the rhymes! ! each line is full of love :)
Powerful usage of imagery. I like the poem and the theme. Great write. Bravo!
You said it Sandra. There is nothing that can not be done, for love, as almost all lovers do think. A Brilliantly wrote metaphoric display, it is.
RHeaven on earth - what a wonderful concept, but a long way away I fear.
Oh Dear Poet, haven't you heard? 'It's the thought that counts, ' they say. And if that be true, then the reality of your wish, could not produce a better result than your poem in any case... Your lover lucky indeed!
A spectacular write outta sight! But insight too by The Grand Poetess You!
Beautiful vision and a beautiful poem.