Sunday, July 6, 2014

Impossible Wish Comments

Rating: 4.8

Oh, if only one could liberate the Soul,
As one does with an imprisoned Dove,
If only Love could fix it all,
Like faith is supposed to do,
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Sandra Feldman
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Dee Corpolongo 11 August 2014

Beautiful vision and a beautiful poem.

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Kirti Sharma 19 July 2014

beautiful... i really like the rhymes! ! each line is full of love :)

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Babatunde Aremu 09 July 2014

Powerful usage of imagery. I like the poem and the theme. Great write. Bravo!

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 09 July 2014

You said it Sandra. There is nothing that can not be done, for love, as almost all lovers do think. A Brilliantly wrote metaphoric display, it is.

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Sina Farajzadeh 08 July 2014

Hi. There are nice usages of similes in this poem. Good Luck

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Valerie Dohren 07 July 2014

RHeaven on earth - what a wonderful concept, but a long way away I fear.

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Brian Johnston 06 July 2014

Oh Dear Poet, haven't you heard? 'It's the thought that counts, ' they say. And if that be true, then the reality of your wish, could not produce a better result than your poem in any case... Your lover lucky indeed!

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Chuy Amante 06 July 2014

A spectacular write outta sight! But insight too by The Grand Poetess You!

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Neela Nath Das 06 July 2014

Ah! So nice wish! If I were.......

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