Love is a surprise like a gift not expected,
Feeds on trust, respect, kindness is detected,
Nourishes with the light in our eyes
Like the blaze of the midday sun,
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Beautiful poem Hazel..loved it very much..Love is like a surprise gift which come to us in unexpected way, again to accept with both hands depend on us.....
Love and Nature put together in a single craft. Such a nice compo...Taking lot many lessons outta it, if you don't debar me...Keep on teaching and exploring the world.
Excellent poem, very descriptive, and beautifully written. Love it!
Unique topic, very catchy and nicely composed. I took some lessons from your cook up
This truly is beautiful and you are letting all know that it can happen, that is special!
So soft to read; it flows most smoothly and the soft syllables really stand out. The title seems to give the poem an undertone that it is sophistry but that's probably just my huge cynicism towards love coming through!
Beautiful poem Hazel, very descriptive of love - very well penned.
very beautiful reality of love... i think you can achieve spirituality through love... very nicely crafted... i liked it....
An analysis with a phased style of telling the very facts about the miracle 'love'. It is a time to reduce the difference between the possible and the impossible.
the power of love is beyond limit and understanding, it could turn the even the heaven writ, could reveal Homeric rhymes onto arid minds.... love is like a British constitution, can do everything, so less chances for impossible possibilities...... good work hazel, words flowing as river Thames.....
Mearvelous Hazel. Full of similes and similes well suited. You have done extremely well with this piece. A gift unexpected! that was so nice a simile. Some were like epic similes. I loved the flow of this poem. Some short lines shows the enthusiasm of the poetess Hearts entwine, Passions bind, Like a catchy jingle, Our bodies tingle, A very nice poem with a loving message of love. Loved it
Quenching our thirst for contentment, With spice and all things nice, Love mingles, looks back twice, Like a catchy jingle, Our bodies tingle, Caressing our journey in all it's joy, Pleasures, treasures at our leisure This was my favorite stanza. Thank you for this amazing poem and it is perfect for those looking for love.
Impossible possibilities, With the wind blowing strongly, Leaving trees bare without care, The storm of living and forgiving, The power of a lovers embrace, With a life to be intricately traced. A great poem.